فَدَعَا رَبَّهُۥٓ أَنَّ هَٰٓؤُلَآءِ قَوْمٌ مُّجْرِمُونَ
Fāʾ conveys succession without interval (fāʾu't-taʿqīb); it was treated in al-Wāqiʿa.
In the twenty-first verse the last demand is made, and in the twenty-second the text passes straight to the calling. In between neither an answer nor a waiting is described.
I record this as an observation about word order: the text does not narrate the refusal — it skips the refusal. We understand it from its consequence.
And the root has two branches in Arabic: to call to someone and to ask for a thing. Both issue from the idea of "calling" — what is asked for is in a manner called for.
| Verse | Expression | Which branch | Who |
|---|---|---|---|
| 22 | fa-daʿā rabbah | To call out | Moses |
| 55 | yadʿūna fīhā bi-kulli fākihatin | To ask for | The muttaqīn |
"These are a guilty people." The sentence ends there. There is no demand: their destruction is not asked for, their deliverance is not asked for, nothing is asked for.
| Who | The form of the prayer |
|---|---|
| Noah | "My Lord! Leave not upon the earth any of the disbelievers" (Nūḥ 71/26) — an explicit demand |
| Moses (elsewhere) | "Our Lord! Blot out their wealth" (Yūnus 10/88) — an explicit demand |
| Moses (here) | "These are a guilty people" — no demand |
I present this as my own reading, and its ground is the wording of the three verses: here the prayer is in the form of a report. The messenger states the situation and leaves the verdict.
And the form of the answer supports this reading: the answer that comes in the next verse is not a command to destroy but a command to march — fa-asri bi-ʿibādī.
In Nūḥ Noah's prayer was treated; the difference between the long demand there and the one-sentence report here agrees with the difference in how the two stories are told.
The concrete sense is given by the lexicographers thus: jarama — to cut a thing, to pluck it off; particularly to pluck fruit from the branch (jarama'n-nakhla). From this jurm — an evil thing acquired, an offence committed.
The logic of the root is worth recording: an offence is named as the plucking of a thing from its place. One who plucks the fruit before its time has broken an order.
| Verse | Expression | About whom | Who says it |
|---|---|---|---|
| 22 | inna hāʾulāʾi qawmun mujrimūn | The people of Pharaoh | Moses |
| 37 | innahum kānū mujrimīn | The people of Tubbaʿ and those before | The text |
| Verse | Expression | About whom |
|---|---|---|
| 22 | inna hāʾulāʾi qawmun mujrimūn | The people of Pharaoh |
| 34 | inna hāʾulāʾi la-yaqūlūn | The Meccans |
The first two words of the two sentences are the same: إِنَّ هَٰؤُلَاءِ. One about a community of the past, the other about the community present at the sūra's revelation.
I present this as my own reading, and its ground is the wording of the two verses: hāʾulāʾi is a demonstrative indicating what is near. The sūra points to a far-off people and to a nearby people with the same pronoun of nearness. The distance between the story and the present, that is, is removed in the language.