وَٱلَّذِينَ هُمْ عَلَىٰ صَلَاتِهِمْ يُحَافِظُونَ · أُو۟لَٰٓئِكَ فِى جَنَّٰتٍ مُّكْرَمُونَ
Wa'lladhīna hum ʿalā ṣalātihim yuḥāfiẓūn · Ulāʾika fī jannātin mukramūn "And those who guard their prayer. It is they who will be honoured in gardens."
| Opening — 70/23 | Closing — 70/34 | |
|---|---|---|
| Expression | عَلَىٰ صَلَاتِهِمْ دَآئِمُونَ | عَلَىٰ صَلَاتِهِمْ يُحَافِظُونَ |
| Particle | عَلَىٰ | عَلَىٰ |
| Construct | ṣalātihim | ṣalātihim |
| Class of the word | A noun — active participle | A verb — imperfect |
| Root | د-و-م — constancy | ح-ف-ظ — guarding |
| What it conveys | A fixed state | A renewed effort |
A list of thirteen verses opens and closes with the same particle and the same construct. Two things change: the root and the class of the word.
Dāʾimūn announces that the prayer continues: it is not abandoned. Yuḥāfiẓūn announces that the prayer is guarded: it is not spoiled.
The two are different things. Something may be continuing and yet be spoiled; the person Sūrat al-Māʿūn describes is exactly this — he has a prayer but he is heedless of his prayer.
This distinction was recorded in the section on al-Māʿūn, and there it worked in the opposite direction:
"In the preceding verse there was sāhūn (an active participle, a fixed state); here there is yurāʾūna (a verb, imperfect). In Arabic this difference is meaningful: heedlessness is a settled condition, while showing off is an act performed anew each time."
- دَآئِمُونَ — a noun: attachment to prayer is a settled state.
- يُحَافِظُونَ — a verb: guarding the prayer is a work done anew each time.
And this accords with the whole logic of the list. The list counts the ways out of a diagnosis (halūʿ). A change of constitution requires both settling and continual effort. The sūra puts both on the list and names both with prayer.
I record this as my own reading. The patterns and roots of the two words are data that can be verified; the distinction from the section on al-Māʿūn is taken from there.
In the section on al-Māʿūn two verses were compared. Above I added al-Muʾminūn 23/2. Now the fourth link comes as well:
| Verse | Particle | Attribute | Pattern | Verdict |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| al-Māʿūn 107/5 | عَنْ | sāhūn — heedless | A noun | Blame |
| al-Muʾminūn 23/2 | فِى | khāshiʿūn — humble | A noun | Praise |
| al-Maʿārij 70/23 | عَلَىٰ | dāʾimūn — constant | A noun | Praise |
| al-Maʿārij 70/34 | عَلَىٰ | yuḥāfiẓūn — guardians | A verb | Praise |
| al-Muʾminūn 23/9 | عَلَىٰ | yuḥāfiẓūn — guardians | A verb | Praise |
And note: both sūras close with the same verb — ʿalā ṣalātihim/ṣalawātihim yuḥāfiẓūn. Al-Maʿārij in the singular (ṣalātihim), al-Muʾminūn in the plural (ṣalawātihim).
I record this as a textual datum that can be verified; the wordings of the five verses are in the text. The interpretation that the table constitutes an order is my own.
أُو۟لَٰٓئِكَ — the far demonstrative in the plural: "it is they." As recorded for dhālika in the section on al-Māʿūn, in Arabic the far demonstrative can be used both for belittling and for exalting; here it is the second: their position is distinct enough to be pointed at from a distance.
فِى جَنَّٰتٍ — plural and indefinite: "in gardens", "in certain gardens". The indefiniteness here conveys magnification.
And the particle again is فِى: enclosure. As recorded for fī ʿīshatin rāḍiya in the section on al-Qāriʿa: "The person does not possess the life; he is inside the life. Not possession but enclosure."
The verse does not say "those who are karīm in the gardens" — that would be an attribute of the persons themselves. It says "those who are honoured": the honouring is something done to them.
In al-Fajr 89/15 man said: "My Lord has honoured me" — and the conclusion recorded in the section on al-Fajr was: "Man reads wealth as a statement of worth… The error concerns what the thing given means."
| al-Fajr 89/15 | al-Maʿārij 70/35 | |
|---|---|---|
| Expression | فَأَكْرَمَهُۥ … رَبِّىٓ أَكْرَمَنِ | فِى جَنَّٰتٍ مُّكْرَمُونَ |
| Where | In the world — wealth | In the gardens |
| Who says it | Man himself — an inference | The narrator — a verdict |
| What happens | Abundance is taken for honouring | Honouring is given |
And the link recorded in the section on al-Ḥāqqa is added here too: in al-Fajr 89/17 it was said "you do not honour the orphan". So the same root in three places: the honouring expected (al-Fajr 15), the honouring not given (al-Fajr 17), the honouring granted (al-Maʿārij 35).
I record this as my own reading. The shared root of the three verses is a datum that can be verified.
| # | Verse | Item | Field |
|---|---|---|---|
| Frame | 23 | Constancy in prayer | Worship |
| 1 | 24-25 | A known right in wealth | Wealth |
| 2 | 26 | Affirming the day of reckoning | Belief |
| 3 | 27-28 | Dread of the punishment | Inner state |
| 4 | 29-31 | Chastity | Body |
| 5 | 32 | Trust and covenant | Another's right |
| 6 | 33 | Testimony | Public |
| Frame | 34 | Guarding the prayer | Worship |
The list goes from outside inward, then from inside outward. It opens with prayer (outer), moves to wealth (outer), descends to belief (inner), descends to the inner state (innermost), rises to the body, rises to trust (another), rises to testimony (everyone), and closes with prayer (outer).
| Half of halūʿ | Its antidote in the list |
|---|---|
| مَنُوع — withholding when good touches | A known right in wealth (24-25), trust (32) |
| جَزُوع — wailing when evil touches | Constancy in prayer (23), dread of the punishment (27) |
And note: the antidote to jazūʿ is not patience but prayer and dread. That is, the sūra treats intolerance not by saying "be patient" outright but by building the support on which patience rests.
In the fifth verse it had said "be patient with a beautiful patience". The list shows how that command is made possible: a regular bond (prayer) and a right fear (ishfāq).